BALLOON
Balloon, balloon,
I love you balloon
whenever you float
I seem to swoon
You flitter and fly
way up in the sky
I wish I could join you
up there so high
I tap you with my finger
you start to linger
around and around
then down to the ground
Balloon, balloon,
I love you balloon!
~Whitney Pritchett
9-26-05
7th grade
posted by Life is better in the South @ Tuesday, September 27, 2005
10 comments
10 Comments:
A very interesting poem. It really takes flight doesn't it?
Balloons! I love balloons, almost as much as I love writing poetry...AND BALLOONS!!!!!!! Back to the point, I really like that poem; I'm trying to think of
a(nother) poem(s). Did you likw my 'butterfly' poem? Just curious.
love your cousin,
Me
I love the rhyme scheme. It sounds wonderful!
Yeah, trying to be poetic and tried the poetry thing. Well, the result, poetry is not my thing! I like other stuff. Just, I'v never been a writer. Of course, I think writing newspaper articles would be fun. Too bad my school doesn't have one! I would like to do the kind of stories on really interesting stuff!
I've*
Your school COULD have one if you wished...
Very cute, Whit.
Ok you really need to post it's been probably 2 weeks. I posted about my trip, you should visit.
love ya
already did
already did what???
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